Due to a conversation I had with miss Sutton on Thursday I have come to the decision that I will change the storyboard I am using to a more detailed and complex version with more shots and a better sense of continuity.This will greatly increase the effectiveness of my video and hopefully convey the point I am trying to get across to my audience that is, Love can hurt alot especially lost love but it is not the end of the world, start afresh and forget about the heart ache its causes. I have been through this many times and I'm still standing. So stand up and get on with your life it's the only way forward.
PS. Happy Bonfire Night.
Hi Fred
ReplyDeleteWell done for meeting the deadline.
We have had a long discussion about how to improve your work. the best course of action would be to:
1. don't use the live version of the song
2. film in a controlled environment i.e. school hall.
3. use a varity of shots.
4. make sure the video reflects the lyrics i.e. man in emotional pain.
5. include lip synching that fits.
The narrative based video hasn't worked so we think going to performance based would give you the best chance of success.
We will discuss further on Monday- in the meantime produce a comprehensive storyboard consisting of at least 60 shots. Decide your cast, costumes and location. also what equipment/ props will you need?
MPS/KKS