I have received feedback from both my teachers and the students I work with about my music video and my ancillary products their comments have been instrument in the creation of my final piece as without this feedback I would not have been able to improve my work to the level it is now.
Comments from Mr Smith about the lack of detail towards the narrative on my Draft video, and Mrs Somel's comments that the Draft was not expressing the full emotion of the characters involved.
I attempted to change this by filming some of the scenes again but even after making these changes their were to many issues left to address before it would be a half decent video and this would take alot more time then I had.
Mr Smith's possitive comments about my document like filming made me realise I should do some more filming like this for my blog.
A comment from Mark Bramford that the trouble I was having not being the end of the world, gave me some much needed motivation that help me to develope my new idea for a music video.
Fred. Once you've got a copy of your first draft you'll need to tube chop it and highlight the elements which didn't quite work. You can then compare these to the new and improved shots from your final video.
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